Avoiding illness is a matter of concern for the whole society. In recent years, many have chosen not to care about their wellbeing and to leave it to the science and hospitals to intercede when is necessary. I believe that people tend to be reckless when it comes to self-care, the pressure of modern times and the lack of knowledge are key elements in the developing of this trend.
Bussy schedule prevent people to dedicate time and effort towards developing healthy habits. This is a terrible fact that have lead the population to wait until sickness to be treated. For instance, most of workers are obligated to work at least 8 hours a day . In addition, most of them need at least 2 more hours dedicated to commuting, leaving roughly 3 to 4 hours for personal time, which probably will be used to keep on studying or working in strategies to climb the professional ladder. With these schemes there is no wonder why is so compliacted for a person to also cook healthy meals, exercise, or overall be aware of their own body.
Furthermore, there is a lack of education, in which people are not fully aware about the consequences of not caring about their own health. For many, drinking more water, no smoking or exercising will not impact positively in their health. For example, when people are told that obesity can lead to cancer they are really surprised, hence the reason for their actions are sometimes just missinformation.
In conclusion, when it comes to health the population has increasingly relied into the powers of science and not into the creation of healthy habits. They would keep on working and living in a self destuctive fashion due to economic pressure and ignorance.
- It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages? 61
- These days, too many people maintain their health by relying on doctors and medicine, rather than following a healthy lifestyle.To what extent do you agree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own kn 78
- These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development? 73
- These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, really, so, well, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82534246575 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69449980194 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568493150685 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.928345318 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.384615385 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148614298345 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513041161738 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330112260514 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085164577937 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349110654377 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.