These days young children spend a lot of time using computers, tablets and smart phones . Some people think that introducing children of technology at a young age is beneficial. Others believe that they would benefit more from playing traditional games?
Technology spread its roots all over the world. Whereas few masses assert that use of technology at young is fruitful for offspring’s and others think that children prefer to play traditional games. Here I would like to discuss both views with my own perception.
There are manifold points to shoreup my views first and foremost, Technology play an vital role in youngsters life. For example, They not only learn online classes with the help of Internet but also get optimum opportunity to broden their horizon of knowledge. As a result, Internet act as a steping stone in children’s life. Moreover, browsing Internet keeps them up to date in their daily routine life. For instance, Internet is the ocean of knowledge for getting information. Which uplift the standard of people’s life and give optimum opportunity to toil hard and get massive success in their future. It is irrefutable that today’s generation and coming generation fully depend on the technology to find out supreme outcomes.
On the other hand, Traditional games are more lucrative to preserve our culture. To’ examplify, It helps them to know about their culture as well as culture. Because we adopt this games from our elders in the childhood and entertain ourself by playing such type of games in our life. Last but not least, Traditional games bring joy and prosperity in our life. For example, By playing such types of games we can keep ourself fit as fiddle and also boost our stamina. Because, This games are stress-free and also help us to overcome from any problem. That is why Traditional games are beyond comparison.
To Recapitulate, Both sides have their own significance. But I strongly believe that playing traditional games are more fruitful for offspring’s. Because they get chance to be touch with their culture and preserve it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Internet) must be used with a third-person verb: 'acts'.
Suggestion: acts
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14238410596 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88970419485 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579470198675 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9859242238 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.65 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190326055123 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574009727635 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646047854927 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124247517606 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611472499406 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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