Items like puzzels,board games and pictures show the gigantic impact on the child's development.I firmly agree that these items will play a crucial role not only for becoming a succesful person in life but also to build a healthy society.
Firstly, i love to recommend the pictures for childs because it will show an immense impact on their intellectual brain for functioning it in sharpway.For instance, When a child is very familar with picture identification process, Probability of imaginig the complete one will be possible eventhough there is a scarcity of picture details.Furthermore, visual effect will have keen impact on child's development when compare to that of verbal communication.Likewise, explaing the culture and traditions of scoiety with the help of picture for childs will show greater extent of impcat on child's brain and also play a crucial role in making the healthy and good scociety for futre genration.
Second,i like to prefere for puzzles beacause it will show higer level of impact on child's developement. For instance, child who is very familar with puzzels, will have a higer imagination power when compare to that of others and also they are ready to face the music in any situations and act upon it immediatly.
Thirdly, for becoming succesful person not only the intellectual powers but also the proper physical fitness will play a fital role in child's further life.
In conclusion, strong foundation in childhood at puzzels, board games and pictures undoubtedly contributes for individauls as well as better society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, likewise, second, so, third, thirdly, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26104417671 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15574243933 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534136546185 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 197.484176581 49.4020404114 400% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 218.333333333 106.682146367 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.5 20.7667163134 200% => OK
Discourse Markers: 21.1666666667 7.06120827912 300% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161240473176 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089468328517 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385849928443 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975437214018 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352248121425 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.1 13.0946893788 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.4 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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