Thr government should give each citizen a basic income so that they have enough money to live on, even if they are unemployed.
To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Unemployment is one of the biggest issues for any developing countries, because of which it is believed that every citizens ought to be paid some money to fulfill their basic needs eventhough they are idle. In my opinion, I disagree with the given statement that government should provide income because of it is not a responsibility of them.
Firstly, one prominent reason of disagreement is, it affect the balance of economy for a country. To illustrate, if the huge amount of money is funded to the unemployed class of society then it increase the burden on the budget. The money which should be used for the new developments such as new transportation, education facilities is going to be diverted for the idle persons which is not a fuitful approach for developing countries.
Secondaly, another reason why I disagree is that it will increase the amount of laziness among the people and demotivated them to do work to satisfy their needs. It will change the mindset of society that government is spending money to manage their requirements so that people will not ever tend themselves towards working. Therefore, the money should not be spent on unemployed people.
However, there are some people who agree with the notion, people should be provided with some money by government on the grounds that, it is helpful to the poor or deprived people of the country. In developing countries, opportunities for work is not available as in the developed nations, at there this income helps them to facilitate their families with food and accommodation.
In conclusion, though there are people who might be in favour of having fund from government to each citizen, I disagree with it because of the problem arise in balancing economy and the increment of lazy people in society due to this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98006644518 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85670629439 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508305647841 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.3518318382 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.272727273 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3636363636 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189060189677 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748776694235 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448109756183 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109033404094 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049643258396 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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