Television has been a great source of entertainment for juniors to seniors since it's invention. Presently, time duration of watching TV in younger group is ever increasing, which is not mainly observed in metropolitan areas but also in rural or suburban region. This essay intends to discuss potential reasons and mention this trend has considerable downsides rather than perks.
Firstly, today television is flooded with channels serving lucrative programs such as cartoon, dancing and singing reality shows, which allure kids. Secondly, some parents allow their infants to watch TV for longer hrs and restrict them to play outdoor sports considering their safety and security. For instance, survey conducted by Cambridge University cites that 77 children out of 100 opted to stay indoor for watching TV against playing outdoor games. Undoubtedly, this scenario was totally reverse few decades ago. Thus, this makes it clear that currently the tendency among children to spend hours in front of television screen has been surged significantly.
As the famous adage goes, excess of anything is bad; which is absolutely right in this case. Spending greater amount of time watching television leads to sedentary lifestyle which ultimately causes premature disease in tender age such as obesity. In addition, it doesn't only affect their social skills but also the eyesight of children; which could be harmful in the long run. For example, as per recent research carried by National Eye Care organization, blur vision issue has become surprisingly common among kids due to which they need to wear glasses from an early age. Unfortunately, this ratio was completely opposite in past. From this, it become quite evident that current practice of watching TV has caused few adverse effects on health of little ones.
In summary, parents should encourage their offspring to indulge in outdoor activities, and also restrict them from spending major time in front of television screen. Entertainment is essential for holistic development of young lives but since demerits of watching TV for long hours is weightier than merits, boundaries should be formed and followed. It is predicted that future generation may take this subject seriously and apply preventive measures effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42816901408 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72432378605 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656338028169 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9040858376 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.352941176 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8823529412 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213510111471 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680007730954 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406396729889 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130029033281 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208686834681 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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