Today children are spending much more time watching TV compared to the past. Is this a positive or a negative change?
On the one hand, watching TV may bring some advantages for adolescents. First of all, watching television is an effective way for various adolescents to relax. Over the past few years, according to some studies, there have been complaints among children and their parents about an overloaded curriculum. Therefore, after a stressful day at school, watching TV could help children reduce their stress via watching several hilarious shows and sitcoms. Another benefit worth being discussed is that TV programs can also be informative and educational. Unlike the past, educational programs for juveniles are now available on TV. Nowadays, kids can learn a great deal of things when they are watching TV. For example, in Vietnam, national television stations provide many useful educational programs for children so that they can improve their knowledge and skills.
On the other hand, there are also a range of drawbacks of watching TV. To begin with, children have less communication skills since they spend less time connecting and playing with their peers. The fact that many juveniles are addicted to watching TV. According to some research related to children's habits, there are more and more of those who prefer to stay at home all day watching television instead of going out with their friends. That is the reason why the increasing number of kids lack communication skills. As a negative result, when they enter the work environment in the future, they find it difficult to interact with their colleagues. Furthermore, some programs contain violent and aggressive content that may affect the cognition of children. There are a wide range of violent programs that parents can prevent their children from. This can suddenly appear when kids are watching TV. When they watch many violent programs, they may imitate it, and some children may see it as normal actions. The fact that it affects children a lot, when they mature, they may have a tendency to be aggressive and violent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ome advantages for adolescents. First of all, watching television is an effective...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15789473684 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66425173491 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53560371517 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5488037988 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6842105263 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222082399087 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075192300197 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425334399087 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176145574407 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128774376842 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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