today children spend more time playing computer games than doing sports
Nowadays, many children spend most of their leisure time playing computer games instead of playing sports. In my opinion, there are various reasons behind this development, which is definitely a negative trend.
To begin with, children have to study under heavier academic than 20 years ago, due to higher expectations from their parents. After finishing official classes, they continue doing extracurricular activities such as club activities, competitions, and do any voluntary work from school or attending extra classes. Then, when they back home, they must do a huge of exercises and prepare for the next lessons, so they are likely to find something to relax and release their stress fast and easy to find. Another reason is that there are a lot of helicopter parents, paying close attention to their child’s activities, education, and behavior. Therefore, children are not able to go out or play sports with their friends, because of their parent’s fear of being injured by playing sports or kidnapped by strangers, so stay at home and play computer games is the best choice.
From my perspective, computer games have some negative effects on children. Firstly, children staying at home for a long time have a tendency to isolate themselves. It also prevents them from fully developing their potential as a person. For instance, they have no chance to practice communication, collaboration, creativity, and critical thinking, leading them to lack social skills. Secondly, staring at screens for a prolonged period of time can cause several eye diseases such as eyesore and shortsightedness. Thirdly, children addicted to games, especially violent and sexual games are likely to develop bully behavior and easily be aggressive.
To sum up, playing computer games is becoming more and more popular due to their attractive and interesting effects. I believe that this is a negative trend that prevents children from developing naturally and may cause health problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 431, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...dly, staring at screens for a prolonged period of time can cause several eye diseases such as ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36858974359 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89468151075 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3081815046 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.666666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324195165475 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971271473551 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106924591491 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199130334029 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458090656972 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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