It is true that we are surrounded by advertisements of companies that desire to promote the products and services. While I accept that advertising has contributed significantly to the sales of popular commodities, I do not agree that people only buy goods because of advertisement.
Admittedly, advertising persuades people to buy unnecessary goods. This is because of the nature of advertising is to help in boosting the sales, so advertisement's producers leave no stone unturned to crave more and more customers. Advertisements employ a wide variety of methods such as emphasising on eye-catching designs or exaggerating the quality of the product to allure customers. As a result, people who cannot resist temptation would end up in impulsive shopping.
However, I would argue that people buy products not merely because of advertisements. It is their needs that prompt them to buy goods. In this situation, people would only watch advertisements after feeling a need for a particular products and they just come across some promoting advertiments of this products. The second motive that drive individuals to purchase goods is the quality of the products. At the end of the day, it is the quality of products that speak for itself and advertisements are soly regarded as a means that provides customers with a wide range of choices. In other word, poor quality products, even with the support of advertisements, eventually fails to make customers repeat purchases.
In conclusion, I reaffirm my position that it could be a misjudment if we insist that advertisements is the only factor promoting high sales of popular goods.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...atch advertisements after feeling a need for a particular products and they just ...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...e across some promoting advertiments of this products. The second motive that drive ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22900763359 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2859115348 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553435114504 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4650100724 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.384615385 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14490051596 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513019841604 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526293752477 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104686023478 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474689270624 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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