In this era, the impact of marketing on society is not deniable, which would be more effective by advertisements. Some people claim that they do shopping on the effect of advertisements but it is impossible to argue against the fact that they will navigate advertising of goods which they really need or when they are able to buy.
There is no doubt that the business of advertising has progressed in a high rate recently. It plays the main role of introducing new products whatever they are in good quality or not. Not only people see them everywhere, such as in TV commercials, on billboards in highways or at streets, but also they have effected by them. This means that advertising would make a strong desire in people to have the product.
Furthermore, even if goods from advertisements are not the necessity of society, some people who follow trends and fashion, will buy them. For example when a celebrity advertises a product his/ her followers, specially young generation, will be affected and prepare it.
To conclude, advertisements are produced to affect consumers and increase sale’s rate. By developing technology and also creating interesting introduction ways, new designed products will seem high quality and more needy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, really, so, for example, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14215686275 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02756701876 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632352941176 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3696400839 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.9 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196080696573 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737100591754 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575333772225 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11592962094 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619083215067 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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