The graph provides information about three sectors of UK’s economy in the twentieth century.
Agriculture is the first bar that had the most contribution in 1900 and it reached to the peak of about 52% in 1950 but the contribution of agriculture decreased near 10% in the last fifty years.
In contrast, Business and financial part had the least contribution to the UK economy in 1900 but it increased gradually until it reached to the top point in approximately 35% in 2000.
Furthermore, manufacturing contribution to the UK economy fall down through the century, from near 45% in 1900 to about 18% in 2000.
In conclusion, Agriculture and manufacturing have downward trend whereas the other selected sector, business and financial, has upward trend through the twentieth century.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'trended'.
Suggestion: trended
...culture and manufacturing have downward trend whereas the other selected sector, busi...
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Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'trended'.
Suggestion: trended
...tor, business and financial, has upward trend through the twentieth century.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, whereas, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 664.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 126.0 196.424390244 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26984126984 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35036895883 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13129185196 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 70.0 106.607317073 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 190.8 283.868780488 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4570162309 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.8 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8 5.23603664747 244% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30516287252 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175189561551 0.103423049105 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101890887418 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175189561551 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101890887418 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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