Nowadays, in the modern world full of innovative things and vast uses of technology the highest amount of consumer goods shows the power of advertising but not the actual needs of the community or society in which they are sold. I believe that advertising has a great impact on selling of consumer goods.However, I also argue that real need is the key to buy goods.
In the one hand, most of the people are living in the modern society where the standard of living matters a lot. People like to use branded thing to maintain their standard in the community. Therefore, they believe in advertisement and think the product shown in the advertisement are always qualitative.There is also the great impact of technology and sense of humour. People use different type of devices and use their humour to direct the advertisement in a much unique and exciting way. However, that attract people a lot to buy different product.
In the other hand, Buying expensive product through advertisement can be only for some of the people who like to experience different product, where as some people to experience it but they buy it because they really need it. Some of the individual can't be attracted by different innovative things but they want to use it in different manner and which are important for them. To illustrate clearly, Asian paints is advertised in a unique way and people buy it to that weather it makes house look attractive or not. However, some buy because they need it to paint their house.
To conclude, highest number of goods are sold due to power of advertising. For instance, it is also sold because it can be real need of society or individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, really, so, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78819444444 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79102526836 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465277777778 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.099050132 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.076923077 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19623049002 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785579238078 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680610607069 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153212600278 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822499165212 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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