Today a majority of children are raised by their grandparents due to the fact that their parents are busy working.
Is it a positive or negative development? Why?
Many grandparents receive postal cards, emails and phones from their grandchildren. However, a significant number of grandparents do exactly what they do every day. They make their grandchildren breakfast, organize their activities and help them with their homework in the evening. That is to say, they are primary caretakers of their grandchildren. This phenomena is common among families which parents are unable to raise their own children as a result of being both of them busy working. Despite all efforts which grandparents put into taking care of their grandchildren, they may not succeed to entirely meet their emotional needs.
Parents consider as the main responsible for upbringing their offsprings. In comparison, due to lack of some emotional characteristics which exist specifically in a relationship between parents and their children, grandparents are not able to carry out some parental roles successfully. The circumstances of children who live with their grandparents are not going to go smoothly. They will face emotional problems such as poor impulse control and dramatic mood swings as a result of neglect of their parents. In addition, enormous age gap between grandparents and grandchildren will results that they do not understand each other properly.
If we notice this issue from a different point of view, there are also some disadvantages for grandparents . In an age that they are planning to have a peaceful retirement they should spend their time taking care of their grandchildren.
In conclusion, raising children by their grandparents will have drawbacks for children and grandparents as well. Grandchildren will not pass normal development stages and grandparents will involve many trouble in an age which they need to rest.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun trouble seems to be countable; consider using: 'many troubles'.
Suggestion: many troubles
...nt stages and grandparents will involve many trouble in an age which they need to rest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47252747253 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20843399454 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1685465532 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338498161513 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130306458244 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752691879565 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213571556714 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643484751166 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.