Generally, in this modern world technology has been totally changed. However these days mostly children are spending long hours for playing computer games and fewer time spent on sports.I think it is negative development also this eassy will discuss some reason about it.
To commence with, there are myriad of reasons why computer games are become famous in young childrens. To elaborate it, nowdays every children has their own smartphone and computers also other electronic gadgets and they are depending on electronic devices . Childrens are every time play games for their entertainment and enjoyment. So do not play any spots game. For example, in Nigeria almost 60% childrens play computer games rather than others activities. As a result, due to advancement of technology mostly children are playing more and more computer games in their free time.
However, there are immence of other causes of of playing computer games because it can create health issues. In other words, children are focusing on playing computer games rather than study's also they do not try any other sports activities so thats why they are suffering with dangerous diseases also it is increasing stress level of childrens. For instance, in Sudan every year almost 44% children are suffering with some diseases due to play computer games. As a result, computer games can create a huge issue for parents and government in future.
To conclude, die to advancement of technology children are playing more and more computer games also it is impacting on children health and imagination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, for example, for instance, i think, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23412698413 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5837954036 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519841269841 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6584640968 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.461538462 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325768527114 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131045078534 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695717598175 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207585234793 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485752369051 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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