Today, many people prefer to manage a business on their own and work independently. There are several reasons according to this attitude, as well as some drawbacks that it may bring for the owners. In this essay, these reasons and minus points will be mentioned.
Today, many people prefer to manage a business on their own and work independently. There are several reasons according to this attitude, as well as some drawbacks that it may bring for the owners. In this essay, these reasons and minus points will be mentioned.
People who run their own business assert several various reasons for their choice. Firstly, some of them had become tired of fixed time work, and they need to experience a flexible time career. Take a full-time employee as a patently obvious example; he/she at least punch in at 8 a.m and punch out at 4 p.m, and when he/she gets home, it may be about 5 p.m; at the time he/she cannot spend enough time with his/her children and spouse or take them out since he/she tends to be tired and need some relaxation. Secondly, some people are natural-born independent individuals with bossy temperature, and they cannot suffer from being ordered by others or obey all words and rules of another one entirely as their boss. So they could be more satisfied and even more successful in a self-employed business, they also can be more productive for the community.
On the other hand, this kind of business may bring several drawbacks to the founders. In general, most people who set up a business are expected to employ their relatives or family members, not qualified or trained skills for the job. So the employer may be at risk of employing inappropriate alternatives for the company. This could lead to declining the productivity of the business and may make a stressful work environment for both employer and employee.
In conclusion, business founders have some motivations to build up the self-employment business, although this could have some barriers or disadvantages for them that they should be aware of them if they want to succeed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, at least, in conclusion, in general, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89869281046 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77007197222 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552287581699 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5567186251 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.307692308 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41580414549 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182254706469 0.084324248473 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140062313157 0.0667982634062 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.322881735187 0.151304729494 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.277135968046 0.056905535591 487% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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