Today, more and more parents depend on their children's grandparents for childcare. Do you think this is a positive or negative trend?
We are living in a society where long working hours and heavy financial burdens are pushing mothers and fathers to leave their kids under the care of grandparents. While parenthood is important in children’s growth and parental care and guide are necessary, I still believe that it is positive for grandparents to take a part in childcare.
Firstly, we have to admit the necessity for relying on the old generation for childcare. In most families, young parents are usually faced with heavy pressures from work, thus it is unrealistic for them to take good care of the kid without any help. It is neither economic for them to quit the job and become a housewife or a househusband -- this will further add to the financial burdens of the family. Therefore, grandparents become the best babysitters.
More importantly, it is undoubted that both grandchildren and grandparents will benefit from it. Young kids can be looked after carefully without extra costs. Meanwhile, retired people can realize more values and become less lonely by taking care of kids. In addition, this is also beneficial on a social stage -- there will be less empty nest elderly, thus making the whole society more harmonious.
However, that is not to say we should underestimate the importance of parental care in bringing up a child. Admittedly, parents should also participate in children’s growth and inculcate them with the latest and mainstream value in modern society. Nevertheless, regarding the fact that most of them still have to work, aid from the old generation is also necessary.
In summary, I am personally convinced that it is necessary and beneficial for grandparents to share the responsibility of childcare. In the mean time, parents’ function should never be replaced. In fact, only through the cooperation of both parents and grandparents can we ensure the kids a healthy and happy childhood.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 201, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'nevertheless', 'regarding', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'in summary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.206214689266 0.247107183377 83% => OK
Verbs: 0.135593220339 0.155533422707 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.112994350282 0.0946595960268 119% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0734463276836 0.0501214627716 147% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0480225988701 0.0437548338989 110% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121468926554 0.122226691241 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0282485875706 0.0403226058552 70% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.0770948191 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0254237288136 0.0326793684256 78% => OK
Particles: 0.00282485875706 0.00163938923432 172% => OK
Determiners: 0.0847457627119 0.0861772015684 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0254237288136 0.021408717616 119% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00282485875706 0.011925033212 24% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1909.0 1933.35771543 99% => OK
No of words: 311.0 316.048096192 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.13826366559 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.347266881029 0.374742101984 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.279742765273 0.28420135186 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.202572347267 0.203846283523 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.167202572347 0.137316102897 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0770948191 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.037074148 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540192926045 0.56093040696 96% => OK
Word variations: 56.3185174443 60.7387585426 93% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.4375 20.7743622355 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6561332986 49.517814964 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.3125 127.492653851 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7743622355 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 47.4117765273 49.1944974215 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.38461538462 1.69124875643 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219202044571 0.332605444948 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.102622351636 0.102741220458 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0508342800344 0.0668466124924 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.567684502704 0.534860350844 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.125009037437 0.148594505496 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088749618117 0.134430193775 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524986818324 0.0742795772207 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.267076804683 0.324371583561 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.100317022863 0.0638462369009 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143111170699 0.228012699653 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373328203655 0.058150111329 64% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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