Today more and more students are deciding to move to another country for their studies. Do you think that benefits of this outweigh the disadvanteges?
There is no doubt that there is an increasing number of students who would like to go to abroad to continue their higher education. In spite of the fact that there are numerous advantages of studying in a foreign country,the drawbacks of this tendency should not be exactly forgotten. This essay totally concur with the idea that positive sides of being in a foreign country for university are much more stronger than negative sides and will analyze the both sides in forthcoming paragraphs.
It is often accepted that studying in a foreign territory could be considered as a challenge by the majority of people.This is going to mean that you will be given more opportunity to increase your horizon, personal skills and other field when you study there. For instance, according the latest survey done by Middle East Technical University for vacancies ,multinational companies are looking for candidates who have bilingual skills and have international experience.Furthermore, these employees are given much more wage, promotion and bonus than usual workers. As a result, this leads to increase number of pupils who is going to abroad to studying.
On the other hand, with the benefits of being in a foreing country will have some disadvantages as well. People usually encounter different experiences such as cultural shock, tongue barrier and they can feel themselves as a homeless one that they have never faced before. For example, my college mate who has never gone to the abroad, went to the UK in order to complete postgraduate education and he had had many troubles such things. Even though he tried to overcome these problems , he failed and come back to the his homeland.
In conclusion, though there are a few drawback of this trend, benefits of going abroad are much more stronger in terms of education, culture and environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07565789474 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9274741349 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585526315789 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.5916607979 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.272727273 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6363636364 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4545454545 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195763604072 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658922711192 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454100720242 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11864881342 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047272120309 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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