Today, more people are traveling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler?
It is true that nowadays more people are traveling than they did in the past. There are various reasons for this situation, and people who are the travelers will get many benefits from these trips.
To begin with, there are two reasons why today more people would go for a trip. Firstly, that is the connecting conditions among areas which is more advantage than before with good infrastructures and various transportation options such as vehicles, trains, airplanes, and boats. For example, a person who wants to get a trip to America from Vietnam could choose going by air with only 24hr instead of using a ship that was only choice in the past. Secondly, it also causes by tourism industry which is developing and widening around the world. Thanks to tourism industry, a lot of resorts are building and becoming the first destination in the holiday of everyone. Furthermore, travel advertising on TVs, newspapers, and Internet help people easy to find a location and make plan for their holiday.
During the journey, travelers could get many new experiences. Sometimes, there are some new soft skills which they learned from handicraft village, sometimes that is reordering their mind after facing the real life over-there. In addition, after the trio, people always feel stronger with full energy inside themselves. This leads them to start to work effectively, and by applying what they learned from the trip, they could get more successful in their life.
In conclusion, nowadays people are paying more for their leisure time on traveling than before, and of course, they are getting many benefits from these activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 363, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to go'.
Suggestion: to go
...ip to America from Vietnam could choose going by air with only 24hr instead of using ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, of course, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08955223881 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62951443798 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59328358209 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3893770087 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.923076923 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3076923077 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324804385519 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118437895042 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110651129986 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240265627452 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110005444915 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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