Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler?
Our world is developing and changing rapidly day by day and this would lead to have more people travelling around than previous time ever . I assume that there are several factors as well as some great benefits from any journey that people may have.
In term of why the travelling activities have increased notably in recent years compared with the past. Firstly , development of the internet brings information all over the world to people of any other nations simply , and they would access to worldwide data easily which would make them curious about other countries to have desires to explore it. Secondly, globalization along with low-cost airlines have become more popular across the world , these would make people travel more for their oversea business or study with better affordability .
There is no denying that travelers reap a great number of advantages during their journey . For example, they would expand their perspective and broaden their horizon when they could learn new culture , languages or customs from abroad places . Furthermore , the increase of more people traveling nowadays would help boost economy of one nation when tourism industry becomes lucrative because it would create more jobs for local citizens as well as national products would be consumed more by tourists.
In conclusion, it is true that movement activities for traveling have grown phenomenally/considerably in recent years and this would not only expose people to the beneficial utilities but also make their nations are becoming more wealthy .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3950617284 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80040013835 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641975308642 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.085961913 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.666666667 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6666666667 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283100862461 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12914096109 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750992951368 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190185925309 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300046814219 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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