Easy access to and low price of passenger vehicles have gone a long way towards increasing in number of travels nowadays compared to those in the past. This growth is because of the advent of modern transport systems and entails a number of advantages such as reducing stress and better lifestyle.
The main reason of an increase in travel is modern means of transport. Nowadays, modern people can easily travel overseas in giant aircrafts, the case which was not possible in the past. The state-of-the-art technology has made traveling more convenient and with associated shorter time than it was in the past by the advent of modern airplanes, automobiles and trains. Furthermore, global trade has caused more people to go overseas for business purposes. Finally, young people travel in pursuit of higher education such as a PhD degree and a better lifestyle, especially those from developing countries. These days, being employed is much more competitive than what was in the past, and ordinary people choose to go overseas or to another city in pursuit of employment.
Travel entails a number of benefits, increasing the traveller’s social skills, providing him or her the opportunity to meet other people. To start with, travelling, especially to a different country, enables the traveller to become familiar with other cultures and make new friends. Moreover, it could encourage the traveller to learn a second language if he or she goes overseas. Generally, people choose to go on a trip for leisure activities and to reduce the pressure they often experience during their routine lives. Finally, travel goes a long way towards a higher income profession and better lifestyle in the event that traveller is from developing countries/ in the cases of travellers from developing countries.
In conclusion, the low price and availability of various means of transport have caused an increase in travelling. This growth has a lot of merits like better jobs and increasing social skills.
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- TOEFL integrated writing: communal online encyclopedia 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: increasing
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Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...red to those in the past. This growth is because of the advent of modern transpor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, as for, in conclusion, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23291925466 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91610938 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549689440994 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4347819169 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34840791087 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111166554369 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634646376851 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176536769287 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123778293604 0.056905535591 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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