Technology boom' has brought substantial changes in every aspect of life. Communication and connectivity has been immensely influenced by incorporating mobile phones and computers in daily life. Where it has made distances meaningless, there it has also imposed threat to the conventional style of writing in term of grammar and vocabulary. Personally, I consider it partially negative development with some beneficial aspects as well. I will support my view point in detail with examples in forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, latest trends of using various mobile apps and social media has changed the world completely and teenagers" perhaps "the most affected group. They are all the time remain connected with their friends and family members through text messages, which made them to write in abbreviations to save time. Consequently a new form of language invented, which has actually ruined the classical or the academic style of writing. These children when sit in examination, would continue to attempt writing in the same format and result in their bad grads. Furthermore, when they want to write anything official, they would end up in using dictionary or taking help from online gadgets to correct their writing and leave a bad impression on their boss. This ultimately has affected these children's career.
However, many modern companies has embraced this change open heartedly and allowed their employees to use this style of writing officially as well. For instance, one IT company has recently hired only those persons who are well versed in using abbreviated language so that they can finish task in short time and can be beneficial for the firm. Furthermore, this has made writing less cumbersome as well.
To summarize, I would conclude by narrating that this change has both positive and negative aspects. This is an imperative change entwined with the huge convenience and ease brought to us by technology development, which should be excepted by all. Although, youngsters should also pay attention to develop their language skill as well to have a sound career in future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Technology boom has brought substantial ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 280, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ess, there it has also imposed threat to the conventional style of writing in ter...
^^
Line 1, column 387, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'negatives'?
Suggestion: negatives
...ry. Personally, I consider it partially negative development with some beneficial aspect...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... examples in forthcoming paragraphs. To begin with, latest trends of using va...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the latest'.
Suggestion: , the latest
...ng paragraphs. To begin with, latest trends of using various mobile apps and...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...all the time remain connected with their friends and family members through text...
^^
Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d with their friends and family members through text messages, which made them t...
^^
Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
...to write in abbreviations to save time. Consequently a new form of language invented, which ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 819, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... ultimately has affected these childrens career. However, many mo...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as affected these childrens career. However, many modern companies has embra...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
...fficially as well. For instance, one IT company has recently hired only those persons w...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... made writing less cumbersome as well. To summarize, I would conc...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 58, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...summarize, I would conclude by narrating that this change has both positive and ...
^^
Line 7, column 64, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ize, I would conclude by narrating that this change has both positive and negati...
^^
Line 7, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...brought to us by technology development, which should be excepted by all. Althoug...
^^
Line 7, column 376, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ge skill as well to have a sound career in future.
^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...well to have a sound career in future.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for instance, in short, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32835820896 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86909621247 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617910447761 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9400626863 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7058823529 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216035356391 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620499719832 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400557502411 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116087560815 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316056243109 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.