In today's competitive world may families find it necessary for both parents to go out for work some say children in these families benefit from additional income, other feel they lack support of their parents due to their absence discuss it in detail
we cannot deny the fact that parents play a very important role in upbringing of children, but as the inflation is increasing day by day it becoming mandatory for both the parents to earn for their family by which their kids gets benifited. However this type of parents find hard to invest some time for their children due to which they lack moral support.
In today fast growing world nobody wants to be dependent on anybody due to this trend many parents face difficulties in upbringing of their children due to this a bond between parents and children decreases and this can make their child feel dejected if parents are not able to guide their children in early age then their are high chances that kids can develop many bad habits in their absense this type of kids gerneally dont have feelings for their parents because they never being there for them.
On the other hand their are some positives of this pratice, as this type of children gernerlly become independent and they tackel their own problems very well,they are able to take new responsibility money earned by the parents can be benifical in their education and fulfilling other needs as they grow up the more mature and confident they become, they can adapt any environment which help them they step out of house for their future
To conclude, it is very important for parents to make proper balance between their personal and professional life.as parents are the only support which children have in their life at early ages.
- now a days more people could rather purchase food than cook at home what are advantage and disadvantage of this trend. 61
- In today's competitive world may families find it necessary for both parents to go out for work some say children in these families benefit from additional income, other feel they lack support of their parents due to their absence discuss it in detai 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79922779923 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37440122766 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548262548263 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.2975951904 315% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 206.202570304 49.4020404114 417% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 310.75 106.682146367 291% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.75 20.7667163134 312% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.75 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401766916531 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.280170390496 0.084324248473 332% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0207959864662 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266982369047 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617133100557 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.6 13.0946893788 257% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.98 50.2224549098 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.45 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.1190380762 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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