In today's world of advanced science and technology, people still value artists such as painters, musicians, and writers. How can art make a difference in our society that science and technology cannot?
Although science and technology are popular these days, but they have their own position. In other words, artists are respectable even though our life is changed. This essay discusses some different attitudes to art and artists in comparison to technology.
Our surrounding atmosphere tends to be changed nowadays. However, it seems to me that painters, musicians, writers, and some related art are common in spite of up to date world. There is some reason why they are still as important as modern sciences. Firstly, I think art is an instinct. For instance, human being enjoys nature such as singing birds, the voice of water, there are to name but a few. On the other hand, when you are visiting a beautiful painting not only you could feel cheerful, but also you would relax mentally even though you do not have enough knowledge about that. Reading the novel works of a famous writer will be enjoyable if you read it carefully. So, art has its own place.
We must admit science and progressive equipment are useful but not enough. Regards to recent researches, human have two aspects, Although, modern things such as laptop, cell-phone, nuclear power and things like that will be useful if the government legislate proper rules for using them, but they never are satisfied you similar to a piece of music or a beautiful landscape. So, both of them are necessary.
In summary, a human being as a creature should be taken care of their spirit as well as their body. If we strength both sides of ourselves contemporarily, we will enjoy a lot and experience a successful standard of living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are never
...e proper rules for using them, but they never are satisfied you similar to a piece of mus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, well, for instance, i think, in summary, such as, as well as, in other words, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86080586081 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64148538164 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630036630037 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.6301980501 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9375 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9375 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142550449241 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474862237756 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485959576958 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826825811816 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716275084511 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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