Too much attention is paid to and too much money is spent on keeping pets, while people throughout the world are starving.
Discuss the arguments for and against keeping pets. Do you Agree?
Nowadays, there is a debate whether people should spend a lot of money on animals or not whereas there are many famishing people around the world. In order to understand it better, it’s vital to bear in mind some important considerations.
First of all, it’s worth considering the importance of having a pet, as they play an important role on supporting humans on many disabilities such as helping deaf people, or even preventing some mental disorders diseases, namely depression, since they bring extreme joy. Not to forget the fact that lately animals are being considered as part of the family to many of us. Also, it seems that people who are brought up with a pet develop a caring nature and empathy towards others, and are likely to be the ones who would support those who need the most.
However, it’s known that people hunger all over the word has a significant importance and people should be more aware of it, although many of them don’t acknowledge the seriousness of this issue. Instead of spending heaps of money with futile things, it could be used to support a poor child in need, or some other type of charity for instance. Nevertheless, animals are not to blame for the starvation in the world, as the amount spent on them are not too relevant compared to other expensive human’s gadgets.
To sum up, I strongly believe that the money spent on animals has no relation to the fact that people are starving. Even if it would be cut, it wouldn’t make a significant change. Instead, people should care more for others introducing some alternative ways to support them, such as donations, as well as the government should look after the economic, political and ecological aspects more in depth.
- The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 61
- Too much attention is paid to and too much money is spent on keeping pets, while people throughout the world are starving.Discuss the arguments for and against keeping pets. Do you Agree? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, well, whereas, for instance, such as, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90540540541 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72503442858 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581081081081 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.5215931046 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0973165762561 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421393226808 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456854806517 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666123772086 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344792383435 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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