Topic 3: Recent research has shown that within the European Union the largest difference between the earnings of men and women exists in the UK. Many equal rights campaigners believe that immediate action should be taken to close the gender pay gap. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
according to recent research, men still receive higher priority in receiving earnings compared to their counterpart: women in many european countries. Therefore, a lot of equal rights campaigners believe that governments should take action as soon as possible to remove pay gap from contemporary society. From my perspective, I strongly agree with this statement. I will discuss why the gender discrimination is still happening in employment and why it is essential to be solved immediately.
To start with, outwardly, gender equality is a fundamental right for people in modern society as well as an internationally agreed sustainable development goal of many nations. However, safety, equality and empower rights between women and men are not yet reality. The first reason is patriarchal society is still a ubiquitous tendency in a lot of european nations. only men are considered to be the base of the society while women are suffering from an excessive inferiority in most aspects of life leading to a high proportions of illiteracy and innumeracy. female labors are not educated about their rights and responsibilities that prevent them from having illusions of grandeur to breach to gulf and climb to higher social hierarchy. it is one large glass ceiling that women cannot empower their position in modern society which they deserve to own. For example, in Turkey, more than 400 women are blue-collar workers with inadequate monthly salary and they are ready to have unpaid work and spend most of time doing caring responsibilities as their social slog for them. secondly, many stereotypical jobs are just for male rather than female in both developed and developing nations. For example, doctors, pilots, engineers, other manual jobs requiring high skills, health, flexibility are believed to be just suitable for men. women do not have well-paid jobs in repercussion to being subservient and drawing the dole from the governments and husband’s incomes. Last but not least, there are more men now working as senior roles in companies that their incomes are much higher than women. according to BBC news, almost ¾ of UK companies pay men more than women and female earn 16% per hour less than men. generally, education and ability of women in many european countries are still low to claim for high position in work bringing better incomes.
After witnessing the truth about gender gap in eu, we can see some main factors why this phenomenon should be removed. Firstly, overlooking the fact that more and more women are struggling to emancipate from metaphorical shakes of poverty is contradicted to social gender promotions which support women rights. secondly, continual sexual discrimination can cause barriers in social and family relationships. women are plunged into its despair while suffering from domestic violence from men and becoming people who are on the very margins of society having no stable and independent incomes. Finally, gender gap enlarges limit for women to have opportunities to express their aspiration and contribute to national economic development. If one economic base has the collaboration between both genders, they are much more likely to promote strongly and sustainably in a near future.
In a nutshell, I strongly believe that the difference between the earnings of men and women in eu should be taken action to remove that generate one happy, fair society life for women. Not only do governments have take responsibility but individuals should be aware of the modern opinions to improve their own future. Moreover, poverty, inferiority, discrimination will will not be barriers to sustainable development of countries in the future.
not be barriers to sustainable development of countries in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in fact, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 13.1623246493 236% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 41.998997996 195% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3179.0 1615.20841683 197% => OK
No of words: 596.0 315.596192385 189% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33389261745 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94096258147 4.20363070211 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99149122535 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 294.0 176.041082164 167% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493288590604 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1007.1 506.74238477 199% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4105323919 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.740740741 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0740740741 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261186084533 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711183636719 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649369455534 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151992237254 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714760844951 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 152.0 78.4519038076 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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