Topic 3: some people think the air flight gives ordinary people more freedom. However, others think the cheap air flight should be banned because it pollutes the air and brings many other problems. Discuss and give your own opinion.
In the last few years, there is an outbreak of the aviation- more and more people have a tendency to travel by air. While some travellers enjoy the comfort of the aeroplane; in my opinion, the low-priced plane should be deleted on the ground of its disadvatages that outweigh benefits.
On the one hand, it is believed that this transport gives passengers more privaty. Firstly, he serving quality of plane is much better than trains, buses and so on… As almost everyone knows, flight-attendants are always ready to give a hand when you get troubles such as if you want some special needs. Secondly, this flying transport gives you a relaxing space so that people can have a good night sleep during the long-term journey, which others can’t do. Finally, the food and drinks there are so delicious appreciating their appetite.
On the other hand, air flight also has incredible disvantages that those who go by air are ignorant. The boom of using planes as regular vehicles has results in air pollution because they emit a large amount of smoke and carbondioxide. According to some recent research, the most polluted places in Asia are reported to be Beijing’s airports and Juibai’s airports. Not only does the use of its cause air pollution but it also leads to noise pollution. Residents live near the airport have a lot of complaints about the noise when aeroplanes take off, especially at night.
In conclusion, economical airlines are really of great help to some people in providing them with convenience and freedom; however, their drawbacks can not be ignored and the government should ban these transport for the better
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97454545455 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74222808607 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650909090909 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9434707639 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293665000928 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091429341953 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622649907872 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148931160183 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366032924386 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.