TOPIC:
Books and movies are considered as two popular tools of entertainment.
Write an essay to discuss the similarities and differences of these types
Nowadays, books and movies are considered as two popular entertainment tools. Most people use them for entertainment purposes in their free time. However, there are also some people who argue that books are better than movies and vice versa. Therefore, in this essay, I will compare and contrast movies and printed books by discussing two main points: imagination, and portability and convenience.
Imagination plays a very important role when we mention books and movies. Reading requires us to think, imagine the situation, story and the personalities of the characters while movies are made from our imagination. Research shows that reading can make us smarter, more creative because when we read a book we have to concentrate and imagine, our brain is forced to work and from there our creativity as well as knowledge are greatly reinforced. On the other hand, movies leave viewers with little imagination, but focus more on visual effects.
Another point to share is the portability and convenience. Book is simple and portable. As long as there is a stable light source, we can read books anywhere, maybe in our break time at school or while waiting for the bus. If we don't read anymore, we can fold it and take it everywhere with us. As for movies, we can still watch them anywhere with your phone, but I'm not sure there will be internet connection everywhere or your phone or laptop will be fully charged and don't need power.
In summary, we can not decide which media is better because this all depends on the individuals’ choice and interest. Older people may prefer reading to watching movies while younger generations seem to prefer watching movies in their spare time. Movies and books have different ways of presenting the story. However, they provide some similar prospects such as the main ideas of the story.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, while, as for, in summary, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00325732899 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65500488103 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579804560261 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7834128166 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3529411765 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0588235294 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178433024888 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703219655193 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924408345372 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119912494507 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103480156443 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.