There is no doubt that the available quantity of fresh water is going down day by day. According to me there are several potential reasons of this issue and some measures could be applied to curb this worldwide problem.
On the one hand, I am going to discuss various causes which contributes in decreasing levels of underground water. Firstly, nowadays electricity is being used in almost all technical advancements such as refrigerators, washing machines, air conditioners, microwaves and so on which brings the need of producing more power. Furthermore, a huge amount of water is required for generating electricity then ground water is pumped and power is manufactured to supply. For an example - “Bhakhra Dam” is a concrete gravity dam located in northern part of India that stores billions cubic meters of water to generate power that is a big reason of reducing water. Secondly, some people do not care about saving water as they sometimes forget to put off taps that leads to the wastage of limited water sources.Finally,increasing food requirements by large population is also a big reason of this problem because almost 70% of the population depends upon agricultural. So, water is required for irrigation of crops that raises the need of freshwater.
On the other hand. As I discussed some reasons of reducing water levels, now I will mention considerable solutions to cure this world level serious issue. First of all, everyone knows that life could not be imagined without use of technology in these days because people has depended on technical advancements completely. So, more technology means more energy requirement; however, scientists must try to make search on those things that could be operated without utilizing energy which would result in saving of fresh water. Besides this, government should organized some programs in order to make people aware about this critical issue that would definitely help to save water. In addition to this, irrigating crops by storing rainwater is an most important idea as instead of pumping fresh water from underground rain water must be stored for giving to crops which would not only meet the scarcity of water but also provides more minerals to crops and further will help in growing society.
To conclude, although there are a lot of reasons of decreasing levels of underground water yet there are many solutions that could be applied with collective efforts of public and government to solve this global issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, in addition, no doubt, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2083.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15594059406 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92742473462 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559405940594 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.2380447419 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.866666667 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9333333333 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203810096756 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720198622273 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448828637828 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145418192897 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343157310481 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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