In many nations, females no longer sense the urge to tie a knot. Some folks think that women are not planning to wed as the majority are financially independent and thus do not crave the monetary guarantee, which marriage can usually fetch. While i completely agree with this idea, i also consider other aspects that are liable too. This essay will discuss firstly on how being economically independent convinces females to stay singles and secondly, the additional two key reasons with relevant examples.
To begin with, pecuniarily independent females are contributing financially. These females ...
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
still the reasons in the third paragraph are not exactly correct. There is no direct correlation between 'woman no longer feel the need to get married' to less marriage or late marriage.
and it is a duplicate for jobs as a reason, since it is related to finance security which has been discussed in the second paragraph.
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'woman no longer feel the need to get married' is related to internal reasons like: finance security, and external reasons like: social development while woman will never be discriminated for being alone...etc
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 394 350
No. of Characters: 2091 1500
No. of Different Words: 251 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.455 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.307 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.779 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 157 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 125 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 92 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 57 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.176 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.41 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.765 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.269 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.469 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.048 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2148.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45177664975 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85211889383 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642131979695 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8244281834 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.352941176 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1764705882 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14645417309 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400498685769 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390057054096 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885459376424 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032527660454 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 78.4519038076 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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