In many nations, females no longer sense the urge to tie a knot. Some folks think that women are not planning to wed as the majority are financially independent and thus do not crave the monetary guarantee, which marriage can usually fetch. I support the given idea, but we ought to consider other factors too.
To begin with, financially independent females are contributing extensively. These females not only are bearing the personal expenses but also are covering the expenditure of the family. Moreover, they are granting loans, increasing a substantial share and achieving impossible dreams that certainly bring sheer happiness, and thus the immense satisfaction and financial security deter them from getting married. On the second place, making their own decision and developing full confidence are the paramount characteristics of fiscally self-reliant ladies. Ironically, women are occupying the majority of the highest position in the work force. So the women are handling sophisticated issues effortlessly and remain self-sufficient economically. If women are not financially stable, there is a high possibility that most women will go mentally timid and marry soon in order to achieve a piece of mind according to the study.
However, financial security is not only the reason, there are more relevant reasons as discussed below. Firstly, females are reckoned with distrust by management because it is assumed that they will soon start having babies and put a top priority to children over work. Therefore, women prefer to enjoy complete freedom by staying single instead. Secondly, as females can have a baby without remaining wedded, the marriage unquestionably deems to appear absolutely trivial for them nowadays. Thanks to technology such as in vitro fertilisation (IVF) and sperm banks, which have made perfectly possible for single mums to give birth to babies. To add to this, the improved effectiveness and availability of abortion, the marriage has become increasingly obsolete in numerous countries, and this type of culture is being accepted by multiple nations. This ascertains why the idea of marrying up is vanished in females.
In conclusion, presumably, technology and liberty are as decisive as financial stability in making marriage undesirable for women.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 354 350
No. of Characters: 1889 1500
No. of Different Words: 222 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.338 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.336 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.946 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 140 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 119 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 90 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 51 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.703 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.778 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.27 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.454 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.054 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...king marriage undesirable for women.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1949.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50564971751 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01577057535 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641242937853 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5366413708 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.277777778 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146906392089 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375551773604 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375534720355 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856664458385 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326501753285 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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