Topic: Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are reasons? Solutions to change negative attitudes
many people think that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. this essay will explicate some problems and purpose few possible solutions to allucate this.
To begin with, there are some reasons why masses believe that international tourism not good for their own country. Firstly, when people traveled in other countries for outgoing then they spend alotts of money and it is directly effect their country's economy. Secondly, it effects their child behavior because when they going out of their country and living some days in other country they attached with those country's culture, traditions and when they are coming to their own birthplace home they miss these things and then they decide to go international counties for their future because they want freeedom, independence so they want to settled in those countries which they recently traveled with their families and it directly affect their own country because a country's future based on their new generation. Soo that's the main reason why people don't like international tourism.
On the other hand, a country depends on young generation because a country need more and more economic power and it is given by coming generation. Furthermore, government should install many tourism place in their country so that no one going anywhere for outgoing. In addition, government should provide new facilities to their people so that they can enjoy during their work and government create more job opportunities and provide cinema halls, malls,entertainment sources and government install many natural parks for every aged masses and theme parks, and many more things. Apart from that government increase their people's interest to learn their culture their wisdoms, moral values so that everyone have their own responsibilities to save their country.
To sum up,Although I belive that tourism is not bad for country, it's their own cons and prons. everyone have their rights to go anywhere and no one stop them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, then, apart from, in addition, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31545741325 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67641029898 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526813880126 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.101407524 49.4020404114 271% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.416666667 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347448726887 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160396068074 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107560563338 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222393966562 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574888607065 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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