Topic: more and more people are moving from rural areas to cities in search of a better life,but city life has its own problems. What are these problems? Suggest some solutions.
At the present time, a huge number of humans tend to move from the countryside to urban areas so as to gain the qualities of their lives, yet meanwhile urban life has its own issues. Therefore,I will point out some relevant problems and take some measures as well.
It is clearly that issues in cities are complicated.Firstly, an enormous number of people moving to cities does harm for their lives instead of gaining qualities.For instance, they would be unemployment because there are not enough companies for them to work, which leads the country would be stagnant. Besides, there could be lack of accommodations for staying. Not only unemployment or no accommodations but also causing damage to the environment. The increasing population in urban leads to water contamination, air contamination and even traffic congestion. For the last issue, if a huge amount of people move to cities, in my view, government would push the price up and promulgate more taxes. It seems not to be in imagination.
Accordingly, the measures to the aforementioned issues should be varied. First and foremost, to reduce those problems, government needs to take a priority on constructing more accommodations for citizens, cooperate with foreign countries to boost the economic development as well as creating jobs for people. Moreover, to keep the environment not to be polluted, leaders should focus on investing in improving public transport systems and encourage citizens ought to take a stroll if it is not worth. In my opinion, these things will be engaged in helping cities to prevent these issues before the damage caused by this trend becomes irreversible.
In conclusion, I believe that these aforementioned solutions will do wonder for urban areas and solve disturbing issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22456140351 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17235674817 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617543859649 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.0753036258 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.538461538 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6153846154 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172656274382 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470997490059 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048427078192 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988401192761 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467041617917 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.