Topic: People continue to recommit crimes even after being penalized for their wrongdoings.
Why do you think this happens? How can crime be stopped?
It is obvious that crimes cause trouble in society all over the world. The per cent of repeat offenders is high exactly, there exist reasons to explain this phenomenon also the solution to solve it.
There are a few reasons for recommitting crime of the outdated criminals, one main cause is the directly unfair treatment around them. Firstly, this is a true that there is a risk in employing people who was committed that could lead to trouble on managing personnel. At the end, leading to the result that rare criminals are able to find a good job and get back to the normal life before being in prison. Besides, because of the fear of being stayed away and the fear of towards communities on the ones used to be criminal, no opportunity is given for them who really need in the former time after lengthy course of imprisonment. Whether these situations happen, the result will lead in a high rate that criminals may suffer from substance abuse, the alcohol and opium for example; which make them to return the bad behavior.
For being solved, it needs to have the supporting of many organizations including the government, non- governmental units and communities also. The most vital of which is though education. Jails will be able to supply essential academic service for their prisoner in order to help them not to struggle to study a suitable job in the future. Moreover, the employers also have to make favorable conditions instead of refusing directly.
In conclusion, people stay away the one after he or she is punished for their wrongdoing only make for going down of the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...non- governmental units and communities also. The most vital of which is though educ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, really, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78985507246 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5989249389 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605072463768 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6931472488 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.166666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218382762726 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668979141867 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455727051879 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120291835005 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405707038447 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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