Topic: Technology has developed rapidly in recent times, but there are still many questions that scientists have not been able to answer to ensure our survival. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, technology has elaborated rapidly, although scientists still haven’t discovered any answers to questions, which are important for survival. I agree with that statement and will put forward my arguments to support my opinions in the following paragraph.
Given the fact that scientists have to date not been successful in supplying sufficient freshwater for all citizens. The supply of freshwater fit for consumption by man and beast is dwindling at such an alarming rate that it is threatening our very existence on this planet. To be more specific, the sources of underground water are being exhausted by over-population and industries. In addition, in many parts of the world, the annual rainfall is hard dropping so that many citizens won't have enough freshwater for our daily demand. It is a pity that many scientists still haven’t manufactured water on a larger scale and at an acceptable cost.
Scientists have recently become aware of a phenomenon called global warming. The initial indications are that if we don’t take care of global warming, it will make life on the earth miserable and even impossible. For example, if the earth’s temperature rises to the extent that polar ice caps begin to melt, the oceans will submerge large parts of the landmass. This would mean that coastal cities like Hong Kong, New York, and London, to name a few, will be completely covered by the ocean. Moreover, global warming also engenders more disasters such as hurricanes and volcanoes that threaten people’s lives. Once a disaster happens, it causes a dozen of death and even damages infrastructure up to billion dollars.
In this essay, I looked at the water and global warming as aspects where scientists cannot provide blatant answers. To sum up, I would agree that many undiscovered enigmas threaten human-being
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, still, for example, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19932432432 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90474340352 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628378378378 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.2142290583 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.6 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150838820345 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480651968691 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494919098065 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872098232726 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376869337908 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.