Topic-There is a growing demand for fresh water nowadays and this is becoming a global problem.What are the causes and solutions?
There is no shadow of doubt that Natural resources have been used by Humans. With a passing day, fresh water calls emergency, by becoming worldwide issue. The pollution and deterioration by human activities-as a major cause and awareness is a best solution, which is further discussed in upcoming paragraphs.
To initiate with causes, the first one is, Human activities degrade the fresh water. Many a factory releases contaminated water to rivers and canals. Moreover, Human Actions like dumping garbage to rivers, releasing fuel from traveling affected the rives. Many rivers and canals in India, which habe been used for fresh water but they become dirty. Therefore, Increasing amount of factories waste have polluted the water.
However, the foremost solution is awareness about water pollution. People should be educated about the importance of pure water. The city ought to instruct the citizens to be more aware about water. Most citizens clean the rivers. Furthermore, some necessary regulations must be enacted by governments to protect natural resources. With the strict laws, should some industries still spew chemicals into water, they commit this and pay high fines. Resultantly, people take responsibility to save water resources with the co-operation of every one.
To conclude, this problem can be solved when the human affairs are reduced by applying strict restrictions to save water. If people do not co-operate each other, it will affect the habitat.
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| 2019-07-21 | Geetaz Gulati | 56 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40869565217 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74442552378 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660869565217 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4589344219 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.1764705882 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5294117647 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194016511893 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579649172129 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518167199759 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109933142952 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201393588761 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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