In this twenty-first century, world has become a global village, which has contributed to rise in tourism. This phenomenon has resulted in making English as a dominant language, spoken internationally. However, some sections of the population believe that it will be the only language all over the world. Here, merits and drawbacks of this assertion will be scrutinised in forthcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, being monolingual will have numerous benefits. Firstly, traveling will become more simpler, people will be able to understand citizens of host countries. This consequently will broaden their horizons and ease the tension between nations. There will be no discrimination on the basis on language spoken and world will be peaceful place to live in. To illustrate, in India despite of having number of languages, still people are connected to each other though national language Hindi. Thus, this trend of one language besides promoting single community will also bring flood of opportunities for students and workers beond the geographical borders.
Nevertheless, English as an only language will bring some disadvantages as well. All the languages of minorities will be lost along with their rich culture and traditions. Countries will lose their diversity, and will become monotonous place to visit. Moreover, most of local literature will be left unread, as people will forget their mother tougue, which eventually will have impact on fututre generation. They will never able to know about ancient stories and legends. Thus, children will fail to understand true meaning of culture.
In conclusion, there are many advantages of single language like elevation in places to explore and chances gaining new experience will be more. People will live with harmony, but it will also led to loss of cultural richness of world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'simpler' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: simpler
...enefits. Firstly, traveling will become more simpler, people will be able to understand citi...
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Line 7, column 194, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...ill live with harmony, but it will also led to loss of cultural richness of world. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, thus, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43205574913 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8689693198 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602787456446 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5914568919 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.6111111111 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9444444444 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323007745113 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107526768889 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848152257182 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207201352852 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802219019193 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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