Sports are imperative in community due to its range of merits to health and social life. However, some people believes that its value is no more that a spare time activities for few individuals. Here, I agree with former view of this assertion.
Admittedly, playing a game has multifarious advantages. First of all, it teaches some imperative skills like discipline, team work and importance of hard work, these skills can make a person noble, who is fit for ideal society. Sports teaches people to be polite and respect all the members of team so in a society it converts rudeness of people into friendly nature. Moreover, by sports person can shine in public, earn laurels for nation and family. One can become prominent and respectful figure in community, inspiring thousands of youngsters to follow the same route. To illustrate, ms dhoni a well renownd crickert in India, was earlier from middle class family and now is a living legend, encouraging number of young souls. Hence, sports can turn person more sociable and also be a path to success.
Besides this, sports keep people away from drug abuse as one is aware about hazardous repercussion on their physical and mental level. And, other social ills have no affect on them, for instance, people playing sports are away from discrimination as they have to play with players from different parts of world. Additionally, it is also a type of career opportunity, which have huge earnings and fame. In the modern world sports have also changed, it is better than earlier times, when there was low pay and high risks. Thus, pupils can continue in sports and have a better career.
In conclusion, sports have number of positive sides and it is more than a leisure time activity. It makes society better and helps individuals to lead a healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90228013029 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59431480141 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615635179153 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6073302827 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5294117647 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0588235294 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224763552018 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626103620101 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762090785143 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135950405512 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480886784153 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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