All living beings make house for their accommodation and humans also the same. Whereas, in this present scenario this trend is changing, people are renting houses rather than buying their own. However, renting has numerous minus points than plus.
Admittedly, in a rented house individual cannot live there permanently, as owner can order them to leave at any time, which can create hardships for family especially for their children. It can change them into anti-social and rude. Moreover, one will not be permitted to improve the structure of house. To illustrate, if a person need to change the colour or construct an extra room, he or she cannot do that. Hence, it can be problem for people to adjust according to others.
Besides this, there are various rules and regulations in rented house, which everyone has to follow, so one is not independent to do their own. For instance, in some places people are not allowed to keep pets. While, on other side, it is beneficial in some ways. As, in the case of travelers, they are not bound to one place. They can move to their favourable climate in any corner of world. Furthermore, rented houses are not expensive and is a great place to live for single person. But, despite of these merits rented house are not the best place to live.
In conclusion, modern generation wants to be free, so rented house will be perfect place for them. While, person with family needs freedom which can only be provided by own house.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79607843137 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45661783046 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596078431373 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0241636806 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9411764706 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181090070129 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607647782441 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613826828901 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121801539126 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750084705351 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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