Tourism has negative environmental impacts on tourist areas.
What are these impacts? How can damaging impacts be lessened?
In the modern society, travelling is very popular activity for many people around the world. The environment of tourist places have been negatively affected by a large tourist flow. This essay will discuss the main causes associated with tourism influence on the ecosystem and propose some possible solutions to avoid them.
I strongly believe, the main problems caused by the tourism are water pollution and excessive building. Everyone knows that the most popular places for tourists are rivers and seacoasts. People polluting water in different ways such as rubbish, noise pollution and fuel pollution. For example, Neva River in St. Petersburg very polluted because of huge number tourists boats. Another big problem is excessive building needed tourism industry. This process negatively affects tourist places and makes it unsuitable for life. For example, excessive building big number hotels in Turkey led to huge areas are no plants and no animals.
In my opinion, the best solutions to these problems are creation of protected zones and introducing new laws. Creation of protected areas can reduce water pollution on rivers and seacoasts. For example, the Volga River has special protected zones where the using of water transport is prohibited. I think that the other good idea is introducing new laws for protection tourist areas. For example, in many countries strictly forbidden construction on certain territories.
In conclusion, it can be said that we have problems with touristic impacts because of negative human effect on the environment. In my opinion, the best solutions to these problems are creation of protected zones and introducing new laws.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42528735632 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70620705278 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547892720307 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.0080720078 49.4020404114 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.2941176471 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3529411765 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154422818553 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498032205834 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716596940084 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107939686925 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793213889253 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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