The tourism industry has grown enormously over the last fifty years, and there are few places which are unaffected by it. However, tourism rarely benefits the countries which tourists visit.
Over the last five decades, tourism has surged rapidly in a lot of countries. A lot of people have started to visit various countries during holidays to experience their culture, food and natural or man-made attractions. Since, a lot of places haven't yet become tourist spots and are developing well, many people are of the opinion that tourism rarely benefits the host country. In this essay I'll discuss why I disagree with this opinion.
The rapidly growing tourism industry brings it's own share of problems. With more people coming in the country, there is always an increased chance of security threat and trading of illegal items. The government needs to invest more on weapons and military training to tighten it's Police force. Tourists leave behind a lot of littered garbage, plastics bags and other harmful substances that possess significant threat to the environment. Many beautiful spots have been destroyed by land wastes. For example, the holy river Ganges in northern India has been polluted with wastes left over by tourists, hence making it unfit to take a bath.
However, tourism is important for the hosting country, since tourists spend a lot of money while visiting different places which brings in revenue for the country. Hence, the government tries to push the tourism industry by building better infrastructure and investing in maintenance of these attractions. Additionally, with growth in business, more employment opportunities are created for the citizens of that country.
In my opinion, though there are numerous harmful aspects to tourism, these can be well controlled by being responsible citizens and imposing strict rules. Tourists should be fined for littering garbage and trying to disturb the peace of the place. The part of the revenue from this industry can be used by the government to improve military and Police so as to stop illegal activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...vernment to improve military and Police so as to stop illegal activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, well, while, as to, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67169864749 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3680978249 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.125 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226865437882 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656221352919 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663228764293 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128203817592 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496761493531 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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