Traditional ideas from older people about the way to live and behave are not helpful to young people and their futures.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are some opinions that traditional ideas from the elderly people about the lifestyle and behavior are not essential to young generations. From my perspective, while I accept that some traditional points of view are out-to-date, I also believe that they are still valuable for the young.
On the one hand, it is obvious that elderly people sometimes have opinions which are less useful and suitable for the young to apply for their life in recent times. For example, in the past, many people always wanted to have a son to continue the family line. But today, gender equality has been increasingly accepted and society has gradually eliminated gender discrimination in all countries of the world. Furthermore, in the previous period, some elderly people believed that girls must be domestic science (housework, cooking, needlework) and "cầm kỳ thi hoạ" in Vietnamese. And this led to a thing that only men have the right to seek a job and pursue their careers. However, these days, the truth is that there are a significant number of women who are more talented and intellectual in many fields in life, and moreover, the number of women leaders is increasing more and more quickly.
On the other hand, I still believed that some traditional viewpoints of previous generations are still valuable and can be applied to our modern life. For example, in Vietnam, after giving birth, many women will be cared for and restored to health by some traditional methods applied many years ago like eating more and get avoid of cold food,... The fact shows that these measures lead to effective results for the health of the mothers. Besides, there are some necessary things of the elderly for the young to learn such as politeness and good manners.
In conclusion, although we should not underestimate the traditional opinions of the elderly, it seems to me that improving awareness of the young to classify and learn the most proper ideas is by far the most practical solution.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-03-20 | ESSEYWRITER | 84 | view |
| 2021-07-05 | TDuong994 | 86 | view |
- The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period
- The diagrams below show the present builidng of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future 58
- More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life but city life can be extremely difficult Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city How can governments make urban life better for everyone 78
- The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year 56
- The graph below shows changes in the percentage of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...e eating more and get avoid of cold food,... The fact shows that these measures le...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01807228916 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70642209735 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545180722892 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.3717485683 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.153846154 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146568934634 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574793836049 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682357317881 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102381967251 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680108362842 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.