Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside.
Do you agree or disagree?
In this state of the art society, there is an issue that made for the population inside city being overweight. this is traffic and housing problems which had several views suppose, it could be solved by transmitting large companies, factories and their employees to the rural. this essay is going to debate about this issue.
In my considerate, I’m absolutely agree with an offer that the factories and their employees are moved to outside city. Firstly, there were many problems which engendered by place of work serve for consumption of human such as smoke be wasted from nitrogen plants or thermal power plants. that made for environment are polluted. Secondly, the amount of people inside city are excesses because all of employees of factories gather on the urban. Actually, when the number of residents on the city increased, traffic and housing will be rose too. I can measure, one people will use one car, and one housing, after that, the level of smoke and dirt will be growth. Consequently, Health and life quality could be downed by physic impact like not enough shelter for everyone, always stuck in the road.
one the other hand, I think large companies have to site in the city because there is many activities will be organize like reality experiment from several large companies such as Starbucks with title “ How to enjoy coffee” or Dior with title “ when we should make up”. In the results, it makes for the city can bustle, and creates individual culture of this place.
In conclusion, depend on particular life I think big factories, and their employees need to moved to the countryside in order some problems about traffic and housing can be solve.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97902097902 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54332116855 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562937062937 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1440243685 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.538461538 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286697474812 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994589986768 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121320851126 0.0667982634062 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183459102889 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837352011043 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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