To tackle the problems traffic congestion and shortage of housing. it is suggested that large companies and factories in major cities should be relocated in the rural area. I thing this policy cab be effective to some extend but it is difficult to implement with possible objections and negative outcome.
There os no doubt that the dense population and limited resources are responsible for housing shortage in major cities. While the rural area is sparsely populated with sufficient land supply. If some company , factories, and their employees move out of town.There would be more vacant building to meet the demand of city dwellers. Beside, with fewer people traveling to and from work inside the city , traffic is expected to be reduced and pressure on the public transportation system eased.
However, the strategy of business relocation seems to be infeasible considering the negative outcomes that may ensure. It may impact the the sales of some companies whose customers mainly come from urban area . Also, the employees may reject to move to countryside as they can no longer enjoy the higher quality education resources , medical service and infrastructure is relatively backward and life is less convenient . People need to move between the countryside and the city frequently leading to new traffic problem especially on the weekend.
Overall, moving some companies to the rural area can reduce the population and traffic in the city and more house can be vacated. However, this polity is is difficult to put into practices as some companies and their employees maybe unwilling to move.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ely backward and life is less convenient . People need to move between the country...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, while, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24902723735 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77847128586 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583657587549 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4506073591 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.769230769 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34213154663 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114878400525 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717441859961 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218664976891 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591723185114 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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