Traffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for many major cities. Suggest
some measures that could be taken to reduce traffic in big cities.
Nowadays, it is obvious that the congestion in nearly all over the world is on the increase
and cities are becoming busier. In my opinion, this problem must be tackled because it is a
global issue and most of people, especially who live in big cities, are suffering from that.
One of the main reasons which causes the traffic jam is that the majority of people prefer
using their own cars instead of public transportation. However, it is not impossible to find
good and effective ways to control the congestion. Public transportation is the easiest way
to solve this trouble. If there are comfortable and cheap public transportations such as
trains and buses, they will make people like to use them better than drive. For instance, in
Manchester, Stagecoach buses are the most convenient buses that help the city to have
comfortable life in its roads and streets during rush hours. In fact, governments should
provide much better public transportation and charge prices that are affordable for
everyone.
Another solution to solve that is to charge the congestion fee for every car that will go into
a city centre. It will either discourage people from driving into that area, or raise more
money for public transportation. A good example of this situation is London, which now has
a congestion charge. Going to the city centre in London costs about £8 per day.
In conclusion, the problem of traffic congestion can be tackled by improving public
transportation and by charging drivers who enter city centres.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ckled because it is a global issue and most of people, especially who live in big cities, are...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1062992126 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82153848497 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606299212598 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4614500441 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7692307692 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.38176352705 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160323688351 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488022235748 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501203972908 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.046534807251 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587595557801 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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