Traffic congestion is a serious problem in many large cities around the world. What do you think are the main causes of traffic congestion? What are some possible solutions?
Nowadays, traffic jam is the most annoying thing when people travel to go to work or go to school. In this essay, I will describe more about the reason for traffic congestion and give some solutions to solve this problem
To begin with the reason of traffic jams, the number of transport has increased too fast, while the streets are narrow. For example, the increase of cars, trucks, and motorbikes is caused by the high population. secondly, many people prefer going to work by thỉe vehicle than using public transportation. In some countries, public transportation is not good or comfortable for people who use it. For instance, in Vietnam, bus or train is not always available in all streets, so it is hard for people to take the bus. More to the point, driving a car helps people save more time than taking the bus.
However, the government should encourage the citizen to use the public transportation by providing more deals when people buy a bus ticket. For example, if a customer buys seven bus tickets in a week, they will receive two free bus tickets. secondly, the road needs to be widened to have more lanes. More and more, the government must build more highways or overpasses.
In conclusion, traffic congestion is the most concern faced now. this essay discussed about the cause of traffic jams such as the increase of vehicles on the streets, and the inconvenience of public transport. this essay also suggests some solutions like using buses to go to work or the government needs to build more highways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85171102662 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65983102742 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551330798479 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2419797831 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1428571429 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118223568976 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450350528875 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584091853799 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954764732146 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734292875999 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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