Trees plays a vital role in maintaining favourable environment and echo system for the living organism. Modern world Witnessed an increasing trend of deforestation for agricultural industrial and other developmental function. A number of people belives that protecting the greenery is the sole function of the government's and large industries; I will tend to disagree with this statement as all individual has their obligations to the nature.
Firstly, modern world encountered a lot of issues related to population explortion; which inturn needs a lot of food and other resources to feed. These problems solved by industrialiston and mass agricultural ventures, resulted in deforestation and disruption in natural echology. Deforestation can cause environmental disturbances like oxygen depletion and reduction in rain besides human beings it will also affect the animals depends on forest. Wold animals will enter the townships and makes trouble for the public, so governments and other big industries should take action against this issues. Governments should make laws to protect the greenery, at the same time annual assessment of the available forest area and the extent of distruction can help a lot in protective measures.
On the otherhand, protection of the trees and echo system is not only the function of government or other agencies but local support shold be needed. People should be aware of the need to keep the forest and problems of deforestation. Forest fires can be prevented up to an extent if the neighbouring popLatin are vigilant, number of ecological issues can be cured by the individual. PLatin new trees and reporting any attack against the forest can help enormously.
Overall, though protection of trees and first primarily the function of government and other major industries, all individual are accountable for the well being of the same.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40273037543 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11398240097 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59385665529 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4606697103 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.769230769 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160405847948 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583570881187 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342100054153 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105622073935 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025245056891 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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