Under British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime.
Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case.
Do you agree or disagree?
Some lawyers in Great Britain and Australia argued that jury has the right to access to information about the defendant's in previous criminal cases. I completely agree with this opinion and the reason will be discussed as below points.
First of all, given access will allow them to clarify every aspect of the case and know all details, for instance, in some countries juries are allowed to read and know all the information about the case and that leads to accurate decision and less innocent people at the prison, furthermore, most of countries who apply that law have less prisons and according to less crimes, as there are many families suffer from the wrong judgements.
Secondly, if this law added to the law's list, it will let them make the accurate decision and fair judgment without any failure, however it will not be in all the criminal cases but at least most of them. for example, in one of news paper was mentioned that after the accused got executed, they have discovered that he was innocent person, in the meanwhile the real criminal was outside the jail. that means less information or limited information access will lead to make a wrong judgement in a critical cases.
in conclusion, In my opinion, laws practice should be amended to allow the jury to be given all the facts before they take any resolution about the case, because it will allow them to see all the side of the case, also they will be in the right perspective as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72373540856 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41443372801 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540856031128 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.387720835 49.4020404114 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.428571429 106.682146367 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.7142857143 20.7667163134 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 22.5714285714 7.06120827912 320% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29133494088 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135424562718 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561847557617 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186124496108 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587030347035 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.