Unemployment remains the biggest challenge to school-leavers in most countries.
How far do you agree with this assessment? What other challenges face young people today?
There is no denying that, unemployment is hitting hard to all over the world and it is even more difficult to school leavers. Besides, there are many others problems that, today’s adolescent are facing. This essay will support my point of view.
To begin with, due to the lack of job placement, even the graduates are not getting proper job as per their qualification, hence, they have to start their carrier from the low level. In this situation job opportunity for school leavers is much more struggling situation. For intense, there are many examples that school leavers had done many invention in the history, but this is not likely to every school leavers. Many international survey had revealed that, the ratio of unemployment is increasing every year, as a result , even younger with certificate are facing tough time to get the job. In fact, even graduates are applying for the lower level of job than the academic level, than we can imagine the condition of school leavers in job placement.
On other hand, not only unemployment, the high level of competition to get the small job and safety pf existing job are another enormous challenges of 20th century generations. For the small level of job even the graduates are competeting in low scale too, while, this can lessen the job opportunity to school leavers. Furthermore, people are living under the thread of safety of their job because of, political instability, natural disaster, sexual and racial discrimination and natural pandemic, which is beyond the control of youth. Due to this risk, youngsters can lose their existing job. For example, due to the recent pandemic COVID19, many people are jobless from 6 months and many young people have lose their job due to the financial crisis of the company.
In conclusion, unemployment is one of the major problems to youngsters, especially for school leavers, however, safety of existing job is another threat that are facing by young people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 337, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun invention seems to be countable; consider using: 'many inventions'.
Suggestion: many inventions
...y examples that school leavers had done many invention in the history, but this is not likely ...
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Line 2, column 524, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nt is increasing every year, as a result , even younger with certificate are facin...
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Line 3, column 708, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'lost'.
Suggestion: lost
...rom 6 months and many young people have lose their job due to the financial crisis o...
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Line 4, column 158, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y of existing job is another threat that are facing by young people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01533742331 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72029650825 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521472392638 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6189432875 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.785714286 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184689540001 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734075861438 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468802373068 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121766046445 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201280429395 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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