Universities should accept equal number of male and female in every subject.
To what extent, do you agree or disagree?
From the ancient generation, it is not astonish when the sexual discrimination has become a controversial problem which has a huge effect on the sake of the society. It is the reason why I concur with those who argue that universities should accept the number of equal sexes in every subject offered.
On the one hand, there are lots of factors coined to explain why authority figures at the school do not want to let female students participate in subjects regarded for the opposite gender. The main factor is some areas of work and related to study fields are not appropriate for female biological characteristics namely a construction engineer working outdoor often require heavy physical activities which females are not able to feel up to do. Another reason is the level of sexual violence has increased more and more. The educational environment with the present of both genders and the continuity intensity is a source of peers even within the collapse period.
On the other hand, it seems to me that it is absurd to carry on discriminate against female student. First of all, women as long as men have to pay the same rate of taxes on education so they are allowed to serve the fair opportunity. It gives women an advantage edge in joining a healthy competition. Secondly, this can help both sexes to increase their communication skills when it comes to have a closer relationship with the opposite gender by working together. Definitely, students of these schools will most probably have less matrimonial problems taking a leading role in population size in the future.
To sum up, despite lots of reason posed to advocate for the sexual discrimination, I would argue that it seems better if universities restrict on this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'astonished'.
Suggestion: astonished
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, in fact, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93537414966 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87170124751 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62925170068 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6280526034 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.916666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131694967623 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428218413487 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781367609762 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806368235585 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689960698261 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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