People have differing views about whether the proportion of female and male students should be balanced or not. Although it might be reasonable to strike a balance, my own perspective is supporting free gender apply for universities.
On the one hand, people maintain that equal gender in colleges has more beneficial than detrimental. The first obvious reason is the majority of the job will not deal with inequality gender issues. This might be explained by an example that, on important events, these type of companies find it easy to split the chores equally, it does not cause the hard situation when men or women are forced to handle other genders task. Only by tackling the problem belong to their gender, can they tackle it with productive performance.
Despite of above idea, I would be inclined to against the viewpoint that choosing gender to accept student’s application. One of the primary factors is, it would be unrealistic to broaden this trend. It is an apparent fact that the number of students depends on how much applications these schools receive so that they are not able to control the equal gender proportion. Additionally, there has been a deniable fact that a wide range of professions required and attract a specific gender. To exemplify, as for mechanic career, a great number of men are genuinely passionate about and are willing to sign up for these, otherwise, sewing or nursing is considered as an amazing job for a girl to completely pursue.
The second reason to state this idea should not be gained popularity is its consequences. In the first place, by dint of sorting out the gender to accept their application, which in turn, these schools lose a great number of potential and talented students. It is indisputable that a straight-A pupil fails to study at their dream school just because she belongs in the female gender, which genders her reputation school reluctant to employ. The reason an individual who lost her or his opportunities is equality gender in universities, not due to their effort, even they have tried around the clock, they could not be accepted. Is it a fair society? Furthermore, as a result of these schools take an unfair way to enroll students, they are facing a problem that missing freshmen target.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...t the number of students depends on how much applications these schools receive so t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, so, as for, as a result, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1889.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94502617801 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78214126607 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583769633508 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3684709286 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.117647059 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4705882353 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0926550721972 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318390867009 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424203167823 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634494098637 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320165675064 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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