Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female study in every subject. Do you agree or disagree.
This issue of academic institutes enrolling equivalent the number of students in term of gender in individual subject is highly controversial. Recently, there is an increasing concern about feminist movement in which mentions the fact that both men and women should gain equal educational opportunities. However, I find that the view is unessential and impossible because of some reasons.
Obviously, students should be given the freedom to choose subjects that they interest in. For example, it would be unfair if boys were denied to attend their expectant courses due to a percentage of male students goes over 50%. Additionally, to be accepted into a course, students firstly have to meet the requirement of the course such as accumulative scores or language levels. Therefore, I believe that the respective academic performances and overall abilities are important factors rather than others.
Furthermore, the nature interests of both sexes also need to be taken into consideration. As far as I know, there is a large difference between male and female regarding health status and mode of thinking. It seems that while boys are rarely successful in positions as a nurse or kindergartens teachers that require a lot of patient, a construction worker or a firefighter is completely supposed as unsuitable jobs for girls.
In conclusion, basing on my argument in support of my view illustrated above, I think that when involving in the enrollment field, it should be lean toward a matter of choice instead of an issue of equality so universities unnecessarily recruit the same number of male and female students.
- Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female study in every subject. Do you agree or disagree. 78
- Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25482625483 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11987747446 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65250965251 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.617967516 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.727272727 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3636363636 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166592835119 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497883470951 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493407363307 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922016388217 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440334205339 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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